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    SolithKnightGuy

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    Default Re: Ww84

    It could have been a solid B if they'd chopped out 40 minutes and closed several plot holes like Steve knowing how to fly a 1980s jet when he'd only flown 1910s planes before. (That one was easy too - just have the body he was inhabiting be a pilot and make it so that he was able to use that knowledge.)

    That - and they took too long explaining that the wishes came at a terrible price. Maybe I missed it - but his getting things after granting wishes confused me for awhile.

    As it was - it was maybe a D+. It had cool moments, and I still liked the main characters, but the plot and pacing were a mess. (Which is an interesting situation. Usually a messy plot makes me dislike the main characters. I suppose because unlike most messy plots, the MCs didn't ever really hold the idiot ball.)
    Last edited by CharonsHelper; 2020-12-28 at 11:12 PM.