Quote Originally Posted by sayaijin View Post
Once I pointed out the brokenness of expanding crit range, he kinda just threw the baby out with the bath water so to speak. It was a real shame because I thought it was a neat idea, but he decided it was safer to just not home brew it at all.
That's a shame. If the spell was just a bonus action it would be Zephyr Strike but weaker (no ignoring OAs, no bonus movement), and hence incredibly appropriate for a cantrip. You could even make it break concentration on other spells like ZS does by making it a concentration spell, like how the various Smite spells work.