Questionable Content XVII: "My Brain Is Trash And I Live On The Internet"

[Wraith]

The fact that May doesn't care is completely irrelevant to the overall problem.

I kind of disagree. May's apparent U-turn on her opinion of AIs who conveniently appear out of nowhere with a brand new body at minimal effort undermines her previous actions, and also makes for a pretty abrupt decline in engagement with this arc.

Winslow wanted a new body.
Winslow got a new body.
May wanted a new body.
May couldn't have a new body.
May bitched out Winslow for being privileged and not considering her feelings as a Has Not.

Pintsize wanted a new body.
Pintsize got a new body.
May wanted a new body.
May HAS a new body.
May is cool with Pintsize because she got what she wanted and no longer covets what Pintsize now has.

May is selfish and entitled, and almost certainly will not be called out on this. This arc is now centred on the wants and needs of two horrible characters who are intended by the author to be rude, unpleasant and irritating and I can't see a single problem with that as a concept for a story.