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2021-06-20, 07:30 AM (ISO 8601)
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#35
Re: Web Serials
Took a look at The Primal Hunter, since it's highly rated. 8 chapters deep and I'll give it a few more to improve, but it's pretty bog standard litrpg schlock so far. The writing is full of very tedious and clunky exposition, and the main character comes across as a sociopath, but I'm pretty sure it's nothing so interesting and just the usual poor grasp of human emotion many new writers struggle with.
I should say it's not truly terrible, like Inexorable Chaos, but it's not particularly engaging so far.
Last edited by Rynjin; 2021-06-20 at 07:36 AM.