Edit: @Kaworu, can I ask a favor? Reading your dialogue is tough in the format you're using. Can you either choose a text color, put it in quotation marks, or use bold text to highlight what you are saying? Separating the narration from the dialogue with dashes only does not make it easy to read. Thank you for considering that.
I will try bolding then ;-) Sorry, I did not think it would be problematic... ;-)