Quote Originally Posted by Zanaril Taru View Post
Meh, kind of tame. Well written though.
I like raunch, personally, but I don't trust my own abilities to write it well. That and this advice always seemed appropriate:

"Giving a reader a sex scene that is only half right is like giving her half of a kitten. It is not half as cute as a whole kitten; it is a bloody, godawful mess."

Thank you, by the way.


Haven't written anything close to the definition of fanfiction in over a year, so I'm glad I can still do it reasonably well.