Quote Originally Posted by ClericOfBelker View Post
...HELLO ANY COMMENTS?
You really aren't clear enough with what's going on in the story, for example, HOW did they get to outside Azure City.

Also, I didn't read the other parts, but if they just did what I think they did, that seems incredibly OOC for all of them, but that's not as bad here as it would be in other places, because this is crack, and sometimes it's hard to figure IC explanations.