[3.5] Trying to improve some formatting [ToB] [AoW]

[DracoDei]

This isn't mine, it is dspeyer's, but I am trying to collect some data for Age of Warriors and... well, let us just say that I don't think dspeyer knew his/her formatting when (s)he originally wrote this (but improved greatly by the time (s)he did the archery stuff).

Going to try to work on this here so I can avoid threadomancy. So far I haven't done anything other than catagorizing about half of the stuff in the short list.

PEACH welcome, but remember I am not the author.

Maneuver List:

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1st level:
stance of mercy -- Stance -- do nonlethal damage
stabilize -- Other -- touched creature with negative hitpoints stops losing hp
basic disarm -- Strike -- deprive foe of weapon
basic stun -- Strike -- briefly stun foe
2nd level:
unbalance -- Strike -- knock foe prone
distraction -- Counter -- make spellcasting difficult
touch of calm -- Strike -- end rage or frenzy
3rd level:
ranged disarm -- Strike -- disarm using thrown weapon
forceful disarm -- Strike -- disarm and send the weapon 40 ft away
paralyzing strike -- Strike -- paralyze enemy
4th level:
partial paralyzing strike -- Strike -- paralyze specific limb (with high dc)
fluid movement -- Boost -- gain movement skill bonuses
powerful netting -- Strike -- knock targets prone while entangling
5th level
amidst the fray -- Stance -- gain DR 30/- but cannot attack
interposition -- Counter -- protect someone else
stance of dignity -- Stance -- gain diplomatic bonuses
6th level
mass disarm -- disarm everyone within reach
chain unbalance -- knock many targets prone
just a dance -- use attack bonus for perform checks
greater stun -- stun foe longer
7th level
whirlwind stun -- stun everyone within reach
distraction, greater -- make defensive casting difficult
8th level
nerve pinch -- Strike -- make target unconscious -- no save
casual parry -- Counter -- ignore attack and inflict morale penalty
stance of peace -- Stance -- prevent all attacks near you
9th level
whirlwind paralysis -- Strike -- paralyze everyone within reach

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amidst the fray
level 5
prerequisites: 1
Stance
You stand in the midst of the battle, not a part of it and not effected by it.
You gain DR 30/- but cannot take any hostile action. This is a supernatural ability. You cannot assume this stance if you took a hostile action in the past round.

casual parry
level 8
prerequisites: 3
Counter
You brush aside the attack with a small motion of one hand, and a look of withering contempt.
Gain a +30 parry bonus to AC for one attack. If the attack misses, the attacker takes a -4 morale penalty to all attacks for the next round.

disarm, basic
level 1
Strike
A quick hook and an unexpected movement, and the sword drops to the ground.
Make a melee touch attack. Do not deal damage. Instead, your target must make a reflex save (dc 10 + half your initiator level + your str mod) or drop the weapon. If your target is holding multiple weapons, select one before rolling.

disarm, forceful
level 3
prerequisites: 2
Strike
You smash the blade aside, sending it flying through the air to land far away.
Like disarm, but on success you select where (within 40 ft) the weapon lands.

disarm, ranged
level 3
prerequisites: 2
Strike
Your hurled instrument wraps around the ricasso, and carries it away.
Like disarm, but with a thrown weapon

disarm, mass
level 6
prerequisites: 3
Strike
You spin in place, hitting every weapon in sight.
Like disarm, but for every weapon held by every enemy within reach.

distraction
level 2
Counter
You know exactly where you cannot be ignored.
When someone within your reach casts a spell (not defensively), make a melee attack to cause a distraction. Roll the attack and damage normally. Do not deal the damage (at all). Instead, the caster must make a concentration check as if you had done twice the damage you normally would have.

distraction, greater
level 7
Counter
prerequisites: 3
Like distraction, but works against defensive casters, too.

fluid movement
level 4
prerequisites: 1
Boost
Extensive practice allows you extraordinary feats of movement.
Gain a +10 competence bonus on balance, jump and tumble checks for the next round.

interposition
level 5
prerequisites: 1
Counter
As an assailant readies his blade, you are quicker, slapping your staff against the flat and redirecting the blow into the ground.
When someone within your reach attacks someone else (not you), you may intervene. Make an attack role and subtract 15. Add what remains (if positive) to the original target's AC for this attack.

just a dance
level 6
prerequisites: 1
Other
You seek perfection in movement, whether in a fight or not.
You may your total attack bonus as a perform(dance) bonus for any purpose where perform checks are useful.

nerve pinch
level 8
prerequisites: 4
Strike
You strike precisely against a nerve and meridian confluence, disrupting chi and thought.
Melee touch attack renders target unconscious. The target awakes naturally within 1d4 hours, or upon receiving a restoration spell.

paralyzing strike
level 3
prerequisites: 1
Strike
You strike the nerves of the neck, temporarily disconnecting mind from body.
Make an attack and resolve damage as normal. The target must make a fort save with dc = 13 + your str bonus or become paralyzed from the neck down. Positive energy does not remove this paralysis, but lesser restoration or iron heart surge does.

paralizing strike, partial
level 4
prerequisites: 2
Strike
You strike the most vulnerable exposed nerves, doing specific damage.
Make an attack and resolve damage as normal. The target must make a fort save with dc = 18 + your str bonus or become paralyzed in one limb (your choice).

paralysis, whirlwind
level 9
prerequisites: 5
Strike
You whip about too fast to follow, striking nerve after nerve.
Like paralysis, but all targets within reach, and the dc is 19 + str bonus

powerful netting
level 4
prerequisites: 1
Strike
You hurl a net with great force and efficiency.
When you successfully throw a net over a target, they must make a reflex save (dc = 14 + your str bonus) or be knocked prone in addition to being entangled.

stabilize
level 1
Other
With a few well-placed movements, you staunch the immediate bloodflow.
As a standard action, you stabilize one creature within reach which has negative hit points (they no longer lose hp)

stance of dignity
level 5
prerequisites: 2
Stance
Your poise and perfect balance impress all who see them.
Gain a +4 circumstance bonus on all charisma-based checks except use magic device.

stance of mercy
level 1
Stance
You have learned where to hit that is sure to heal.
While in this stance, you do only nonlethal damage, even with weapons that normally can't.

stance of peace
level 8
prerequisites: 4
Stance
You walk calmly, arms upraised, radiating peace from every pore.
Anyone wishing to make a hostile action within 50 ft of you must first make a will save dc 19 + your wis bonus. This is a supernatural ability.

stun, basic
level 1
Strike
A sharp blow to the head, and a moment is needed to recover wits
Make a normal melee attack. If it hits, the target must make a fortitude save (dc 11 + your str bonus) or be stunned for 1d4+1 rounds

stun, greater
level 6
Strike
A sharper blow to the head, and a longer moment is needed to recover wits
Make a normal melee attack. If it hits, the target must make a fortitude save (dc 20 + your str bonus) or be stunned for 3d4 rounds

stun, whirling
level 7
Strike
So many heads, so many sharp blows.
Make a normal melee attack against every target in range. Each target hit must make a fortitude save (dc 17 + your str bonus) or be stunned for 1d4+1 rounds


touch of calm
level 2
Strike
You reach the mind of your target, and set it back at peace.
Melee touch attack does no damage but ends targets rage and/or frenzy. This is a supernatural ability.

unbalance
level 2
Strike
You strike carefully at the targets knees, forcing him to the ground.
Make an attack role to serve as a DC for your targets reflex saving throw. If he fails, he falls prone.

unbalance, chain
level 6
prerequisites: 3
Strike
Soldiers often stand in neat lines -- very much like dominoes.
Like unbalance, but you may select an adjacent square for your partner to fall into. Anyone in this square must make a similar reflex save with a DC 2 less. If they fail, you select the squares they fall into, and so on. The chain continues (with the dc decreasing each time) until a reflex save succeeds or the chosen square is empty.

[The-Mage-King]

Uh, capitalize all maneuver names... Bold the part in the descriptions that says "prerequisites", as well as capitalizing the stuff there.

That's all I've got.