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Thread: First Attemts at an Oots Avi
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2006-12-18, 11:31 AM (ISO 8601)
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First Attemts at an Oots Avi
Hello, I recently decided to try my hand at making Oots Avis. All of the images that I made and Liked I put here. I want some positive critisizm on what I could Improve on.
Last edited by gegiet; 2006-12-18 at 11:42 AM.
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2006-12-18, 11:40 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: First Attemts at an Oots Avi
The arms are too long, and the mouth a bit too long on one of them (i think it was named Ivellos or somethng), but other than that, it's good. Good!
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2006-12-18, 11:56 AM (ISO 8601)
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I like the iron golem looks like a mummy
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2006-12-18, 12:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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2006-12-18, 01:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: First Attemts at an Oots Avi
I like how you've done Ivellios' robe, and the swords look good. One thing I did notice is that the arms sometimes come out of the sleeves at odd angles. Try extending the arm back towards the shoulder to check that it lines up - you can always put it on a layer behind the sleeve afterwards.
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2006-12-18, 01:48 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: First Attemts at an Oots Avi
thanks for the advice, I think I will do that next time.
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2006-12-18, 02:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: First Attemts at an Oots Avi
I think you made the arms too long because you calculated normal arm length from the end of the sleeve, not the shoulder.
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2006-12-18, 02:14 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: First Attemts at an Oots Avi
yeah, I can see that.
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2006-12-18, 02:18 PM (ISO 8601)
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2006-12-18, 02:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: First Attemts at an Oots Avi
Thanks for the suggestions, no I present to you, the new and improved Ivellios.
any other suggetions?Last edited by gegiet; 2006-12-18 at 02:41 PM.
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Avatars by Vael, badges for both Iria and Gegiet
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2006-12-18, 03:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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2006-12-18, 03:24 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: First Attemts at an Oots Avi
thanks, Electric_Monkey's suggetion helped me a lot.
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2006-12-28, 03:48 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: First Attemts at an Oots Avi
I find that if you're using a scalable graphic vector thingie, your lines are much to thin! Arms are also too long. I just started avatars, and I've had to do a bit of work getting arms and legs to look realistic.
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