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2017-10-17, 08:26 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
Phwew, Hedge Mage is harder then I expected... Working out a mechanic that will allow them to still counterspell (since they only get 0-4th.)
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Hey Ani, hope you don't mind but I had a few ideas for your PrC you could add on... or not at your preference
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just an idea, but what about an enhanced bonus to strength and movement speed when you shrink (think ant man style) So say, 3rd you ignore the strength penalty from it, and gain a competence bonus on checks equal to your X. At 6th level you add X/X of your level as an __ Bonus to strength, and at 9th ?
You could also give them the ability to ignore crit/SA immunity when they are small (finding that perfect spot, however you want to fluff it.
Also, I would give them the ability to SA any enemy they are occupying a space with (think ant man going super small and just wrecking shop), after all you will lose reach and what not as you shrink...
As is it is kind of static, you want to put some juicy bits in there, besides "you can go smaller". I would suggest adding a capstone, and not requiring trap sense... most rogues trade it away.
EDIT: I would change the skill points to 8+int, keeping with the rogue.
Yeah, some of the things in BoVD were annoying, but then so was ancestral relic in BoED, after all why can't I have an evil aligned family heirloom? . Your class sounds interesting, good luck!Last edited by Westhart; 2017-10-18 at 07:00 AM.
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2017-10-17, 08:50 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
there I am done with mine
for those wondering how it fits the theme you start out stealing little stuff, then...
also this is the first homebrew thing that I have ever done, so please excuse any bad wording.
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2017-10-17, 08:51 PM (ISO 8601)
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2017-10-17, 09:07 PM (ISO 8601)
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Well, here is my 2 cp
peerless pickpocket: I would make this level*2 and a competence bonus.
I like this: I would rephrase it to say he can replace a umd check with a sleight of hand. ig he fails he must wait until he gains another rank in sleight of hand until he can try again (or just use the penalties (if any) of UMD)
easy casting: o would just say light armors for the first one, and give a different ability for the next.
they never saw it coming & nohing is sage: these are great.
arcane lifting: I would cut this down to the spell level x2 (x3 if illusion)
I also rewrote they never saw it coming so it would be easier to read:
They Never See it Coming (Ex): When you use sleight of hand your opponent does not counter wit a spot check, instead they use a slight of hand check.
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2017-10-17, 09:14 PM (ISO 8601)
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2017-10-18, 06:26 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
Is it too late for me to join this competition? I have a pretty cool idea in mind for a Reduce person based Caster prc, though I woulds like to know if the comp is still open before I do anything more concrete.
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2017-10-18, 06:31 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
No problem, happy to help
The contest does not end till next month, (17th) so yeah plenty of time to enter. Good luck with your entry!
My entry will be delayed somewhat (was going to post it tomorrow, but you all will have to wait until next week, as my SD card I had it on literally melted
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2017-10-18, 08:02 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
Whoop, finally home and getting onto the computer (work was exhausting...)
I'd love to hear them, I honestly didn't think much about it besides: Little thief = Best thief
Just an idea, but what about an enhanced bonus to strength and movement speed when you shrink (think ant man style) So say, 3rd you ignore the strength penalty from it, and gain a competence bonus on checks equal to your X. At 6th level you add X/X of your level as an __ Bonus to strength, and at 9th ?
You could also give them the ability to ignore crit/SA immunity when they are small (finding that perfect spot, however you want to fluff it.)
Also, I would give them the ability to SA any enemy they are occupying a space with (think ant man going super small and just wrecking shop), after all you will lose reach and what not as you shrink...
As is it is kind of static, you want to put some juicy bits in there, besides "you can go smaller". I would suggest adding a capstone, and not requiring trap sense... most rogues trade it away.
EDIT: I would change the skill points to 8+int, keeping with the rogue.Last edited by Aniikinis; 2017-10-18 at 08:31 AM.
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2017-10-18, 08:24 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
That would be pretty powerful, I would make an ability that lets you do that or sneak attack, so you can't SA and touch, but it is your class :P
Huh, that makes a good amount of sense and I was tempted to just give them their reach as normal but felt that was too cheesy.
Good point, also I've always kept trap sense when playing a rogue. Not sure why, but I just like the idea behind it even if it's not too good mechanically.Homebrew: If it is mine feel free to PEACH and/or use it.
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2017-10-18, 08:33 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
Gonna add them as two separate abilities that can't be used together normally, with the capstone allowing them to be added together. Also, Wasps already don't take the penalty to strength, but they don't get the bonus to dex though.
You can trade trap sense to ignore (partially; 1/2) SA immunity. the idea? I'll agree it is interesting, but in execution? Doesn't work so well.Last edited by Aniikinis; 2017-10-18 at 08:34 AM.
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2017-10-18, 08:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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2017-10-18, 08:43 AM (ISO 8601)
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2017-10-18, 09:59 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
Phwew, slammed out my Hedge Mage, going for t2 if not t1 power wise (And only 4th level casting too) :P
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2017-10-18, 10:17 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
You asked for a peach, here goes:
Ant strength: Is the first strength bonus supposed to be active all the time or only while shifting down?
The strength bonuses on this are pretty high, at 9th level:
you have +4 (half level; you round down unless stated otherwise),+8 (shrink), and then whatever yo have from your dex mod for a total of 12+ (not to mention the +8 you have to dex while shrinking)
so let's assume an elf (they get dex bonus, and I hate playing human b/ it's always "oh they get a bonus feat, skill points; hell even 5e kept the feat, albeit as a variant ) with a starting dex of 18, and a 12 in str at 9 levels with this, and they are not using anything else to increase the scores So your dex is 28(+8 from shrink; so +9 modifier), and a str of 28 i think (+4 dex, +4 level, +8 shrink). Note this is w/out magic, with magic you could throw in an easy +6 on both as an enhancement, then get another +5 inherent... you see were this is going right?
I would remove where dex increases str (a +4 just there), and make the 1/2 level an inherent (thus if you took a theoretical "10th" level in epic it would cap nicely at +5) and the shrink an enhancement. You'll still get some high numbers but you won't be as high.
The Bigger they are: Looks nice
pinpoint+tiny terror: I would make this chosen at the beginning of each round, every attack allows more combat versatility (which is nice) but slows turns in combat
puny power: why are you even requiring a check? I mean 5/squares? it should multiply not divide by the number of squares betweenHomebrew: If it is mine feel free to PEACH and/or use it.
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2017-10-18, 10:38 AM (ISO 8601)
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Only while shifting down and yes I do and will tone it down when I get back from work tomorrow, as of right now I'm too tired to fix it.
The Bigger they are: Looks nice
pinpoint+tiny terror: I would make this chosen at the beginning of each round, every attack allows more combat versatility (which is nice) but slows turns in combat
puny power: why are you even requiring a check? I mean 5/squares? it should multiply not divide by the number of squares between
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2017-10-18, 10:41 AM (ISO 8601)
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2017-10-18, 10:56 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
@nothingabnormal: the class is looking good*, just found a small detail: you forgot to add what metamagic twist does.
I still haven´t started work in mine but I already got the idea for it, going to make a spore related class, using them as a means of attack and defense not sure if it´ll have any spellcasting tied to it but I think I´ll make it more mundane for now.
*this goes for everyone else too, I´m seeing lots of great classes.
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2017-10-18, 11:02 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
Thanks, I'll add the ability.
EDIT: added it.
I still haven´t started work in mine but I already got the idea for it, going to make a spore related class, using them as a means of attack and defense not sure if it´ll have any spellcasting tied to it but I think I´ll make it more mundane for now.
*this goes for everyone else too, I´m seeing lots of great classes.Last edited by Westhart; 2017-10-18 at 11:06 AM.
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
I know, I just don't want an insane amount of power even if it is reminiscent of Ant Man
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I still haven't started work in mine but I already got the idea for it, going to make a spore related class, using them as a means of attack and defense not sure if it'll have any spellcasting tied to it but I think I´ll make it more mundane for now.Steam: Papa Palpy Palpatine
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2017-10-18, 03:30 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
with a quick skim over hedge mage I have a couple things that I would like to point out. One, you didn't list the class skills, two, you might want to say you can not cast spells 5th level or higher, you just said that you can't cast 5th level spells
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2017-10-18, 08:20 PM (ISO 8601)
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2017-10-18, 09:13 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
mmmmm.... quick thing. wrong thread, the thread for submissions is here
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2017-10-18, 09:13 PM (ISO 8601)
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Core, wrong thread, use the submission thread for the posting.
EDIT: Whoop, ninja'dLast edited by Aniikinis; 2017-10-18 at 09:15 PM.
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2017-10-18, 09:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
My bad, Posted it in the right thread.
Anyway, Please PEACH if you can, I don't do Homebrew too often and would like to get better at it. My main concern is is that I overtuned the Packed skin damage reduction.
Edit: looking over The Hedge Witch table I can't seen to find openminded on it, which also means the level that you get it isn't shown.Last edited by Coretron03; 2017-10-19 at 06:00 AM.
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2017-10-19, 07:15 AM (ISO 8601)
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Well, here goes:
1) You can get in a level earlier then most PrC's. Not a bad thing necessarily, but if you wanted to make it 5th make the skill ranks for knowledge and spellcraft to 8
2) Skills, you have some copy/paste cling on.
3) Personal adjustment: when you reduces someone's skim. Did you mean skin?
4) I would also rephrase personal adjustment (something like this, no changes, just easier to read): When you cast a reduce spell you can choose for it to also effect you.
5) Packed Skin: I would make this DR/- equal to your your class level, then within the capstone double it ( DR10/-) is not gonna do much at high levels. also Admantite should be Admantine
6) Faster. Smaller, Stronge: I would put the one's you can choose from either in a list or italicize the names (more of a readability thing)
7) Focused Effect: At higher levels can I quarter it? Make it single target? (To shrink even farther?)
The class looks nice!
Edit: looking over The Hedge Witch table I can't seen to find openminded on it, which also means the level that you get it isn't shown.lifehomebrew, that and skill lists ><
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2017-10-19, 07:17 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
Alright, fixed the Ant Power class ability a little.
Assuming the elf from before, at level nine:
they have have +4 (half level; you round down unless stated otherwise),+4 (shrink), and then the +2 from dex equalling a +10 bonus to their strength score not including stat boosting items. However they would only be able to use the total of this bonus for up to 68 minutes per day (7.5 minutes per level at a 4 size category decrease), meaning that the bonus ranges from +7 to +10 based on how dire the situation and can only be used for slightly more than a quarter of the day at the very most before becoming relatively useless for the remainder of the time.Steam: Papa Palpy Palpatine
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2017-10-19, 07:19 AM (ISO 8601)
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2017-10-19, 07:50 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Prestige Class Contest Chat Thread I
I just (well not just... it was last night) fixed up the things the NothingAbnormal pointed out. does anyone else have any criticisms or suggestions for this PrC?
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2017-10-19, 08:14 AM (ISO 8601)
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Stinging Strike: At level 9, you may use Tiny Terror and Stinging Strikes together.Muad'drin tia dar allende caba'drin rhiadem! Los Valdar Cuebiyari! Los! Carai an Caldazar! Al Caldazar!
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