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2011-02-17, 07:03 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-17, 08:32 PM (ISO 8601)
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Ohmigod! Did I ever tell you I love you Nil. That was great! Poor me... I was gonna marry Viola but she died. And I apparently blame myself for it...
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2011-02-18, 04:29 AM (ISO 8601)
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dont blame yourself, its not that you didnt jump to save her from that blast i launched.
(IM LYEING SO HE CAN FEEL BETTER!!)Despite everything, its still me.
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2011-02-18, 05:27 AM (ISO 8601)
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Last edited by Lix Lorn; 2011-02-18 at 05:27 AM.
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2011-02-18, 05:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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Last edited by Hiro Protagonest; 2011-02-18 at 07:27 PM.
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2011-02-19, 12:21 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
Currently thinking of a title for this. Feedback and critique appreciated.
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Five years ago, Viola saved the world from a demon invasion
Four years ago, Viola, Kurama, and Penny graduated from the Academy and passed the final exam
Three years ago, Viola and Kurama were wed
Two years ago, what seemed to be a simple expedition turned into a living nightmare
Two years ago
Two paladins stand before an ominous entrance, stalagmites and stalactites polished and crafted into the shape of a fanged mouth, a pitch black hallway emitting a odor of decay.
Lix, make a torch. NO! That’s four inches too large, and might get out of control! NO! That’s an inch too small, it might die out.
After five minutes of bickering, a suitable flame lights the way into the cavern. Rabbit confidently charges forward perfectly dodging traps, fortunate for Lix who couldn't seem to pay attention. Four years had passed since the death of Grim, and each day seemed more unbearable than the last. For the first week it had been nearly impossible to get her to leave her room, and these missions were supposed to help her cope by showing the paladins do, but she couldn't help but wonder why Grim had betrayed them.
Her thoughts were interrupted as she walked into Rabbit's back, much to the elder paladin's ire. After three paladins requested new partners because she couldn't focus, Rabbit volunteered. Rabbit thought she could help Lix, or would learn to be more patient with others. This newfound patient was often running thin.
We found the tomb Lix. Now please pay attention, this is important. People have been disappearing since.....
Tell me child, why do you allow her to boss you around? Isn't she holding you back? Does she not represent that which took away what you loved? What would you do to take it back? …...Him back?
….........understand? Lix? Were you paying attention?
Yes Rabbit, I know why we came.
Then repeat what I just said.
Lix took a second to look around the room to try and figure that out. A large sarcophagi filled the center of the room, blood stains dried onto the marble. The room was small, but elaborate images were carved into the sides of the tomb, pictures of famine, death, plagues, and fierce monsters.
People have been disappearing since the tomb was found open, and were here to find out why.
Not exactly what I said, but true.
Rabbit bent over the tomb and become to examine the tomb.
Come here, I think I see a face.
Do you really want him back? Would you do anything?
Anything?....
One week later
Is there anything you can do for her Blue?
I'm sorry friend, but the fever will not die. The demons plaguing her flesh and are stronger than my magic. They eat not at her bones, but her heart.
Mordokai was one of the few who often understood Blue, but his assumed wisdom was a cultivated image. He knew Blue better than most, but half the time it came down to a good guess and watching Blue's reaction.
So, its up to her then?
I'll help how I can, but this is her battle. Only the weapon of her heart can conquer this battlefield.
Lix's flesh was pale, cold, and dying. When they didn't return, Mordokai sent out a search party only to find Rabbit dead and Lix cursed. Two days later, her heart stopped.
Current Day
Mistress, we cannot locate the survivors. 15 paladins are still unaccounted for, and rumors among the cattle claim that the wizard Blue is creating a cure for the Blight.
I see. So then, lets fix this little problem, shall we?
The Vampire Queen walked across her throne room, crystals shining with malevolent energy. Snapping off a crystal, she walks up the winding stairs to find a new victim.
If the old ways won't work, we'll have to create new ones, won't we?
Lix smirked, and went to find her newest victim.
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SpoilerOriginally Posted by Fred RogersOriginally Posted by Mother Teresa
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2011-02-19, 12:28 AM (ISO 8601)
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Last edited by Silverraptor; 2011-02-19 at 12:29 AM.
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2011-02-19, 12:29 AM (ISO 8601)
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Oh, thank you.
Though I doubt this story line will be better than the one you have planned out.
Odd fact, this is my second attempt at writing an ongoing story on this forum. Both have been dark and grim.
Like I said, this is my way of showing how much we fans appreciate you taking the time to write such an amazing story. Please keep at it.Last edited by Saint Nil; 2011-02-19 at 12:33 AM.
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SpoilerOriginally Posted by Fred RogersOriginally Posted by Mother Teresa
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2011-02-19, 08:48 AM (ISO 8601)
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All will learn to fear me, in time. And then they will learn to love their queen.Recent Homebrew: The Socialite | The Crystalline: Memory Altering Construct Race | Sanguine Hand, a ToB Discipline of blood and cruelty
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2011-02-19, 12:17 PM (ISO 8601)
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Saint Nil, your story has convinced me to let my character be in it.
As long as he's not one of the missing paladins.Avatar of George the Dragon Slayer, from the upcoming Indivisible!
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2011-02-21, 06:56 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-21, 08:36 PM (ISO 8601)
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Being featured in cool stories can lift your self esteem. Perscription-free.
You know it's funny how I'm somewhat inclined to write fanfiction for a story that's just posted on some web forum for fun.
By the way, could someone link the thread that spawned this? I always feel like an intruder with everyone and their character knowing each other.
P.S. Still updating TvTropes. Last added: Instant Mastery trope for Rabbit and Viola
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2011-02-21, 10:41 PM (ISO 8601)
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The original thread is mostly people talking with Silver's stories peppered inbetween. Any story there is way more easily read at the beginning of this thread.
Getting to know everyone is less a matter of joining some special club and more just hanging around long enough for us to put an image to your name. Try some freeform RP if you want to make more friends here. Or just chat in the thread. I completely understand that some people (myself included) dislike random banter, so I prefer to write.
Writing your own fanficition isn't a bad idea. It might help bring more attention to yourself. Especially if you write about others, as it gives them more reason to pay attention.Avatar by Logalmier
SpoilerOriginally Posted by Fred RogersOriginally Posted by Mother Teresa
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2011-02-21, 10:47 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-21, 10:49 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-21, 11:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-21, 11:04 PM (ISO 8601)
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Okay everyone, what do you want to read next?
The Fall of the Academy?
The Hope for the Future?
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Lix's Plot?
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2011-02-21, 11:04 PM (ISO 8601)
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Lix's Plot, please.
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2011-02-21, 11:24 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-21, 11:24 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-21, 11:25 PM (ISO 8601)
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Who said anything about making your own? Go request one like all the other non-avatarists do!
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2011-02-21, 11:42 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-21, 11:44 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-21, 11:45 PM (ISO 8601)
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Wait you're lazy because you made your own avatar? I'm confused...
Also, The Fall of the Academy is the clear choice.LGBTitP
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2011-02-21, 11:47 PM (ISO 8601)
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Well, that creation wasn't supposed to be used, like, ever. And I'm lazy because I've rather been going without avatar for 5 years than spend 3 minutes on a post in the request thread.
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2011-02-21, 11:50 PM (ISO 8601)
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Alright, tied between discovering what Lix is up to and what Lix did. I'm going to be up for a bit, so lets wait and see if we get a tie breaker vote.
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SpoilerOriginally Posted by Fred RogersOriginally Posted by Mother Teresa
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2011-02-22, 12:29 AM (ISO 8601)
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Nil, from a story tellers stand point, I'll go for what she did first. Then tell us what she plans to do.
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2011-02-22, 09:03 AM (ISO 8601)
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silver, can you inform me wat you planned that happend between Sarudark and Blue or i need to do thhat?
Despite everything, its still me.
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2011-02-22, 12:34 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-02-22, 03:34 PM (ISO 8601)
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My vote goes for Fall of the Academy!